First interveiw...please give some feedback...

The camera goes to the dressing room where Johnny Dread is sitting down listening to his ipod. Lucy Jade walks up

Lucy Jade: Johnny, what are your first impressions of Freedom Wrestling since arriving here?

Johnny glares up at her

Johnny Dread: What, no excuse me? No, can i please ask you a question Johnny? Can you not see I'm busy?

Johnny stands up

Johnny Dread: Lucy, that is my first impression of Freedom Wrestling, No Respect! People just barge into locker rooms and demand questions of me! And I am not going to put up with it.

Johnny starts to walk away, then stops and glares back at her

Johnny Dread: You see Lucy, I am going to get my respect and I dont care what I've got to get it. And if someone tries to stop me...

Johnny smiles

Johnny Dread: ...they'll see how Dreadful I can be...

Johnny walks away laughing



Some feedback would be much appreciated....

**OOC: feedback for ya, not too bad honestly. I would recommend maybe adding in some more detail, try to make the reader feel as if they are actually in the room with you. so for example, describe the room, the atmosphere, maybe add in how you're dressed, give yourself some little gestures that you do, i.e. look at how Sam does his RP's always shuffling papers, or running his hand through his hair, stuff like that. those are just some minor tips, but overall not to bad mate.***